Thank you for your considerable effort in rendering this volume into a form suitable for filming. I appreciate my work being presented by someone who “gets it.” It was especially informative to me to see how a descriptive passage can be turned into a viewable scene, and enabling the f/x to replace explanatory dialog, thus allowing continuous action.
Dialog between author and screenplay writer continued throughout the process. All suggestions were implemented in a thorough and proficient manner.
This has been an enjoyable and enlightening experience on my part. If I were reading the screenplay for the first time, I would certainly want to get the book and see the movie!